And so she types
And so she writes
And so she glides
And so she rides
She puts her words
She sings a song
Her brain is up
Her brain needs life
Push, push the voice
Push, push the nag
Get out, get out,
Clear up the cloud
Type, type she goes
Her fingers pause
What now, what now
Oh no they're gone
18 October 2010
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quick! run after them! :p
but yea, gotta write when u got them
oh yea, at 1st I read:
"push push the voice"
"type type she goes"
then i realized u had a comma
upon further inspection
3 ways of reading it came to mind
1. push push (quickly)
2. push (slight, rhythmic pause) push
3. push, push (this one has a normal comma pause, so, compared to 2, it sounds more like push... push the voice, while 2 sounds like push. push the voice)
i prefer 2, but 3 has a deeper and more grounded feel to i guess - kind like you're telling yourself "hey, do this", while 2 does this in a more upbeat manner
ok, said too much :p
houngggggggggggg you're quick!
this may be my favourite remark from you! love it when people actually squint in-between my thoughts.
it's actually number 1 for me, but come to think of it now, i'll leave it open for the rest to interpret. it's fun that way, too.
yay yay hi houng! =D
This sounds good! I would really love this if it would be a lyric of a song...can you?
Hey Mish! Thanks =)
Can I what? (I'm slow like that =p)
Haha! I am requesting for you to make this as a song...:D
Hahah. I'll try, dearie. =)
hi
and yea, to ur prev post, write :)
And so I shall.
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